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Fiction Copyediting Package

$4.25/page (250 words) copyedit and proofread

$2.75/page (250 words) copyedit

Dori is an experienced, detailed, and thorough copyeditor. After talking with an author, Dori will proceed to a free, no-obligation sample edit of 5 manuscript pages. Sample edits will be returned in 24–48hours. (Dori copyedits more than 15 manuscripts annually.)


Copyediting Package

$4.25 per page for a copyedit and proofread

$2.75 per page for a copyedit

(For editing purposes, one page is the industry standard of 250 words.)

-Each edit includes a double-check step
-Turnaround time: 10 to 35 business days, depending on length and amount of corrections needed


Copyediting fine-tunes a manuscript and prepares it for publication. It covers spelling, punctuation, grammar, style, syntax and format, among others. All suggestions are made and tracked using the Microsoft Word Track Changes feature.


The Copyediting Packages includes (but are not limited to):


  • correcting spelling, grammar, punctuation, repetition, dangling participles, syntax and word usage while preserving the meaning and voice of the text

  • recommending stronger verbs

  • correcting dashes and ellipses (they each have specific guidelines for use)

  • light restructuring of sentences

  • correcting numbers (spelling out or using numerals)

  • checking for a consistent style and format   

  • reading for overall clarity and sense

  • checking for smooth transitions and chapter-ending cliff- hangers (when appropriate)

  • applying the proper style guide (for books, usually the Chicago Manual of Style)


The Copyediting and Proofreading Package ($4.25 per 250 words) is a three-step process:

  1. Dori copyedits and returns the manuscript with her recommendations; the author makes revisions and emails the revised manuscript to the editor.

  2. Dori proofreads the manuscript and emails it to the author. The author looks over the document and returns it to Dori.

  3. Dori then double-checks the entire manuscript, including reading word for word any new revisions. This double-check process distinguishes Breakout services.


The Copyediting Package ($2.75 per 250 words) is a two-step process:

  1. Dori copyedits and returns the manuscript with her recommendations. The author revises and emails the revised manuscript to the editor.

  2. Dori then double-checks the entire document, including reading word for word any new revisions. This double-check process distinguishes Breakout services.


Breakout Editing recommends the Copyediting Package for authors readying a manuscript (or partial manuscript) for publication or submission to an agent or publisher. It's also a wise option for those who need a fresh pair of eyes before a rewrite.


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For book-length fiction and most nonfiction, as well as essays and short stories, Dori recommends the Chicago Manual of Style, 16th edition, and the Merriam-Webster dictionary. These style guides are industry standards and Dori is well-versed in both. She's the type who instantly recognizes the difference between an en dash and an em dash and between past tense and past perfect tense.


For blogs, websites, pamphlets, brochures, etc., Dori recommends the Associated Press Stylebook and the Webster's New World dictionary. Shorter works typically need a more abbreviated style. As a former full-time journalist, Dori is acutely aware of AP style. But she still prefers to italicize book titles.


Style Manuals

Good-faith deposit: Once a project is confirmed between Dori and the client, at least half the funds (as a show of good faith) will be required before the official start date. For a copyedit, the balance will be due a day or two before the manuscript is returned to the author. If you have questions or would like to work out another option with Dori, just ask.

Payment: Dori accepts PayPal (preferred), credit cards, checks, or money orders. Author is responsible for fees. All funds must be in US dollars. Once payment has been confirmed, editing will begin on the agreed-upon start date.


Billing: a PDF or email invoice will be emailed to the client at the start and completion of the editing.

Breakout practices consistent, clear communication with its clients and informs them when editing begins and when it's near completion. Dori is committed to her turnaround times.



Book a Copyediting, Content Editing or Proofreading package and Dori will edit your book blurb (or blurbs) as a courtesy. With content edits, she also provides courtesy edits for your book synopsis and your query to agents or publishers (if you're trying to publish traditionally).

Free Blurb Editing
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